Biographies Archive

I stand at just short of 6 feet, topped with an explosion of unruly jet-black hair. Narrow blue eyes are set deep into my face of gentle features. My skin has the paleness of one who spends months at a time in deep space.


My history is one of the man who did not know himself, and then begins to experience a revelation. My life is in the middle of that revelation. I was abandoned by those who created me on a planet whose location I cannot reveal to you and which is so desolate in nature that you probably don't care to know. Perhaps by chance or perhaps not, I was dropped fortuitously close to a smuggling den. Offering my services as a simple deckhand, and with a mysteriously blank past, I joined the crew of Domsi Rhemus' smuggling crew. At this point my life is hard to explain to one who has not experienced it. I neither knew my past, nor was even aware that I should even have a past. It was as if I was born with all the capacities of speech and awareness, fully grown. Through slow assimilation into the crew, I became aware that my development had been different from these men. They had a past, some even had futures. I had neither.

As the crew began to accept me as an equal, if an odd one, I grew happier. Finally an opportunity came for me to prove myself. Using my janitorial duties as a cover, I discovered a spy places aboard by our Hutt rivals. In a moment of climax on the bridge of the Domsi's ship, The Ebonyarrow, I saved his life from the spy's treachery. Together we expanded his smuggling fleet to a dozen ships over 3 years. These days were the happiest of my life. Domsi and our men were like brothers to me, the stark halls of our ships; my home. While I was smuggling spice out of Kessel, the Hutts launched a surprise attack; destroying Domsi and the Ebonyarrow. Once again I was alone and distraught. Confused and with no points of reference, revenge consumed my mind. Hunting down Gnutella the Hutt, I bested his flagship, Bloatfloat, with the help of my first lieutenant, Stavford. My revenge sated, I left command of the organization to Stavford, and began a listless wandering of the galaxy.

Many tidbits of information were learned in these journey; how to rig a blast back from half-empty fuel cell; how to run a hyperdrive on bantha spit and magna-tape etc. In my wanderings, I heard rumors of a reclusive psycho-force cult that lived in the tradition of the legendary warrior-hermit, Yoda. I spent a nearly a year in search of them, at long last I found them in a living hell. Degobah, dank, soft, dreary, wild. Everything that was not the mess hall of a starship. My trials among the hermits were arduous both physically and mentally, molding my psyche and body into what it is now. After proving myself to the monks, and serving them in whatever they wished, my past was revealed to me.

I learned of my remarkable DNA, which was bred over centuries to create the optimal human genome, and of my true name. Vague hints where made about force potential. The hermits could only delve so deep into my unconscious mind without destroying who I am. Having tasted a sample of myself, I was left with all the more hunger for the fullness of it. Striking out into the galaxy, I seek to create a name for myself.

Recently I have been accepted into the ranks of the finest organization in the galaxy, The New Order. The sense of brotherhood in the Imperium is one I have not felt since my rough and tumble days aboard the original Ebony Arrow. Now filled with a purpose in life, I seek to do my best for my new family in the Imperium.

Piter, I think if you use page breaks in appropriate spots your writing will take a huge leap forward.

After all, E = δP

(δ being the Kraken/Omnae constant)

And Third person is preferable, being difficult to interact with a galaxy of people who play in the Third person....

Unless your style is to speak about yourself from the PoV of an old man talking about his past, lol

lol, I love the way you put that Heir.

But they have a point Piter, try and get into the idea of third-person, it will make things much easier, for you and everyone else.

Using First Person in a biography can work. I think RT Bot's Biography worked out rather nicely in that regard.

I think some organization couldn't hurt; just so it's easier for people to go back and easily reference things. Some players here also add additional details about their characters in different formats, such as Jaeriel or myself . This helps them to get into their character a little better. Just an idea.

thanks for the advice, I plan on RPing in 3rd person, but prefer to write an autobiography.

Looks good to me.