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's about time!

Basics.
Name: Adhee Spiel (AH-dee SPY-el)
Age: 24 to 25
Gender: Female
Species: Human
Home World: Alderaan
Primary Weapons(s): Dual lightsabers, green. Can be attatched to make one full weapon, since she has been trained in wielding a dual-bladed weapon as well; is capable of being worn as either one or two seperate weapons (Often kept hidden, one in each sleeve).
Force Sensitive: Yes

Character Physical Description:.
Height: 5"10
Hair Color/Style/Texture: Raven, subtly waved; has grown to about the small of her back.
Eye Color/Shape: An icy green that fades into yellow when closer to the pupil.
Identifying Marks/Features: Said to have cold and rather piercing eyes.
Skin Tone: Fair, slight maple
Build: Slightly toned/athletic, slim.
Others: Said to have a commanding presence and confident air about her. Tends to move with a cat-like grace.

Character Background.
History: Adhee was born to two lower-class citizens on Alderaan, though her mother died during childbirth and as a result, her father cast blame on her for the tragic affair. A victim of depression and, in time, alcohol and other influential substances, her father took out his pent up emotions by beating his child on a frequent basis.

In time, however, Adhee's uncle, her mother's older sibling, rescued her from her predicament and took her in as his own. He raised her until she was 11, forming the role that would eventually cement itself as the introduction of what Adhee would know little of - love, care, and true concern for her life and what would become of it.

He sent her off to become a member of the Rebellion, for it was a dream of his that she would one day become Jedi. He put her on the last transport off of Alderaan, the day before the planet was destroyed.

When the transport stopped, Adhee left it and wandered about Corellia, where she inevitably learned of the destruction of her homeworld and the death of her only family. That day she did not return to the transport, and did not go on to fulfill what she had once thought was her immediate purpose in life as she knew it. Instead, she learned what it took to survive on the streets, stealing and harming others as the years tread by. Yet on one such day, she stole from one who was not to be stolen from.

Adhee snuck aboard a freighter that was docked on Corellia to resupply and refuel. She was almost immediately detected by the commander of the vessel, but he saw in her a dark area of her soul that served as a strength, a fire. He did not have her killed. Instead, he had her locked in the room she had broken into in order to steal and consume their food, and was taken along on their long journey back to Yavin 4.

Personally selected and drafted by Ahnk Rashanagok, Adhee ascended swiftly through the Sith ranks. Even as an apprentice she was often sent on assassination and political missions for Ahnk, in order to help reinforce his power. Yet during one such trip, Ahnk was killed, and Adhee returned to find the Sith Brotherhood in someone else's control, and it was no longer her home. She struck out on her own, as a renegade, a trained assassin, and an apprentice Sith.

Yet during her absence she also came to fall into the hands of various masters, several of which were no longer affiliated with any order of their own. Along with this, and the knowledge and wisdom of years of travel that would introduce her to new aspects and sights of the universe, she slowly adopted her own view of the world, and would no longer claim herself as a Sith.

A rogue, with no true siding and a personal idea of the balance and the workings around her, Adhee is a restless soul seeking herself in the natural flow of the galaxy.

History greatly formed and influenced by Ahnk. Thank you for your help, Ahnk!

Looks like a great start!


Just some minor nitpicking though....



Leia Organa founded the Jedi Academy on Naboo, and as such it was not founded until a few years after ROTJ unless there is some different backstory I am unaware of.

That did not come into consideration! My apologies - it would seem my bio needs some work. Is there anything you would suggest when it comes to changing this accordingly?

You don't actually cite spending any time on Naboo, you could just change that line to say your father sent you off to the Rebellion to become a Jedi and whatever... perhaps he knew about Obi Wan or something.


*Shrug* It's just one sentence, no biggie. :)

Ooh! I see. Well thank you, I'll change that right now. I thought I made a big "oops" for a bit there. I appreciate the help. :)