Biographies Archive

Name: (Unknown) goes by shadow
affiliation: Sith
Rank: apprentice
Race: Human
Gender: Male
Age: 32 (not including 25 years of stasis)
Weight: 190lb
Hair: Black
Height: 6'1
Force Sensetive:yes
Homeworld: Unknown
Armor/Clothing: cloak
Armaments: Two fire red lightsabers
Dorids: One unknown sith battle droid form long ago the droid has been Shadow's only friend sense his fatherleft him

Background info:

Born to a sith mother and a sith father shadow had an upbringing filled with the training and teachings of the sith. Although his parents trained him day after day shadow showed no intrest. His father and mother gave up trying, feeling ashamed of there son.

On Shadow's 14 birthday his mother was attacked by two jedi knights. Shadow watched as his mtoher was forced back by the jedi's attacks.... Then it came, the hiss of a lightsaber burning through living flesh and bone, it was at that moment shadow's mother fell to the floor dead. It was also the moment, when the darkside swept through shadow's entire being turning his rage into power and emotion into fuel. Using his new found power Shadow raised himself, took his mothers saber and cut down the two jedi after sustaining a blow to the shoulder.

After laying on the ship for hours he was recovered by his father who put him in stasis for almost 25 years. Shadow's father abandoned him and disapeared. Throughout his 25 years of stasis the darkside in shadow had grown a tremedous amount and shadow did not waste it.

"Archive info deleted or unreadable"

Over the next 12 years shadow trained himself (to a limited extent) to use the dark side in solitude using a sith holocron and sith book owned by his parents. He also spent the time learning how to construct sabers. When he became 30 he left his solitude in search of power.

How can you possibly train yourself over 16 years? All apprentices have a master and even then they have limited powers.

better?

I'm 6'1 and 145, and I'm a friggen stick. Just something to think about.

I'm like 6 feet and 120, so its possible but the guy is going to be really skinny. And have a major lack of muscle (like me). For a suggestion, I'd go for like 180-200 and you wouldn't be fat.

thnaks for the suggstion

can i reapply him for my character again i jsut had to re register my account becuase something happened. or should I make a new character instead.

Name: (Unknown) goes by shadow
affiliation: Sith
Rank: apprentice
Race: Human
Gender: Male
Age: 32 (not including 25 years of stasis)
Weight: 190lb
Hair: Black
Height: 6'1
Force Sensetive:yes
Homeworld: Unknown
Armor/Clothing: cloak, and a mandalorian battlearmor modified with modern techniques and material
Armaments: Two fire red lightsabers, and a specially designed DC-22
Dorids: One unknown sith battle droid form long ago the droid has been Shadow's only friend sense his fatherleft him

Background info:

Born to a sith mother and a sith father shadow had an upbringing filled with the training and teachings of the sith. Although his parents trained him day after day shadow showed no intrest. His father and mother gave up trying, feeling ashamed of there son.

On Shadow's 14 birthday his mother was attacked by two jedi knights. Shadow watched as his mtoher was forced back by the jedi's attacks.... Then it came, the hiss of a lightsaber burning through living flesh and bone, it was at that moment shadow's mother fell to the floor dead. It was also the moment, when the darkside swept through shadow's entire being turning his rage into power and emotion into fuel. Using his new found power Shadow raised himself, took his mothers saber and cut down the two jedi after sustaining a blow to the shoulder.

After laying on the ship for hours he was recovered by his father who put him in stasis for almost 25 years. Shadow's father abandoned him and disapeared. Throughout his 25 years of stasis the darkside in shadow had grown a tremedous amount and shadow did not waste it.

"Archive info deleted or unreadable"

Over the next 12 years shadow trained himself (to a limited extent) to use the dark side in solitude using a sith holocron and sith book owned by his parents. He also spent the time learning how to construct sabers. When he became 30 he left his solitude in search of power. To pay for his travels and search he has taken up the work of a part time bounty hunter, althoguh he still is constantly on the look out for a sith master or lord to train him.

(edited a little bit, and i'm going to completely restart my character becuase I still am not sure where my character is right now hoep that is ok.)

No offence or anything, and I like the biography but it doesn't seem quite realistic. Events and actions are taken either too quickly as in multiple times within a paragraph or there is no real time set to your biography in the case of actions and events.

Either way.....

basically it was a quick thing done and when it was done i wasn't that good of a writer but better now so if you want me to redo it i will

Hmmm...

I have no idea who this guy is, I don't remember him. I'd say no to that level of Force ability given the document above, however; I will not press this assuming that someone will throw a vote for and not against.

it was apporved once before but i can completely redo him and make a completely new character if you would like.

tommorow i will redo and edit shadows profile :).

and, by the way, the Sith as well as the Jedi cannot have any marital or parental ties, so that might need to be edited round.

just helping,
Queter

That and you dont backstory train yourself, you start off as nothing and RP your self training, if thats what your going to do.