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Name:Nightmare
Nickname: The Jedi Hunter
Title: The Mechanical Nightmare
Height:6'8.5"
Weight 547 lbs.
Age: Unknown
Force Sensitive: No
Weapons: Red Lightsaber, Blaster Rifles, Gun Wrists (Wrists with guns built in), Detenators and Claws (Feet and hands).
Ship: Dark Wing (a black X-wing)
Appearance: Nightmare is a tall mechanical monster, his feet and hands are claws like that of General Grievous, His head is metal and resembles the nocturnal Hammerhead from Pitch Black, he has a gun wrists and his right arm has a detenator storage tank built in to it, his eye screen glow reds, his upper torso is a heavily armoured sheild like carapace and his red on the inside/black on the outside, it has his cape is attached to it and his lower torso has his lightsaber clipped to a hook on his waist along with his rifle in a special case built in to the left side of his waist.
Desciption: A souless fiend who hates Jedi.
BIO: He was a Jedi till the age of 19 where he turned to the dark side after a battle with Darth Jordan, then after 4 years of training he defeated and killed Jedi Master Scott Murphey, followed by his defeat at the Jedi Sith War 2 years later at the hands of Jedi Master Tew (Bradley Tew). Years later he was supposebly killed by Jedi Master Joshua. But he survived and was rebuilt as a Machine. He could no longer control the force but his mechanical weapons and abilities made up for that. Now he has a radar screen on his face that has 2 mechanical eyes. 1 Is for scanning, magnetic feilds, Radio waves and electrical feilds. The other eye scans heat levels (in short he can see heat). With this he can use his mechanical brain to process the information he gets to create an image of what he's looking at in his head. All his emotions were removed except: Hate, Anger, Envy and Pride, these keep him going forever and ever and ever... And now he's a bounty hunter killing anything, anything at all for the right price that is....................

many things bug me....

Age:1017.......PLEASE....nothing really lives that long....? please...all tough he might be unknown... but still...

he`s a living dead? righty then...well...

and hey every sith hates jedi`s guts so there`s no point, but oh fine...

anyway I say improvements! make him more realistic

Sorry I meant his rage uses the force to live but Thomas is technically dead so I call Nightmare the living dead. As for age the force keeps Nightmare alive for he's just rage in armour (strange I know) but because of this as long as his never ending grudge dosen't end (obviously dosen't) it can use the force to keep the rage living on. So Nightmare is ageless but it has existed for 1017 years so it isn't age but I can't say oh it dosen't have an age can I. I thought it best I said that it did. Oh Nightmare dosen't have a gender thats why I refer to Nightmare as it. P.S: I'm gonna update it anyway.

Having such a high-powered character already, without any training threads is a no-go and I'm sure the staff will tell you the same thing.

Now might I suggest you seek out training from the Sith Order located here: http://therebelfaction.com/forums/forumdisplay.php?f=132

Most likely they will be able to begin some form of training with you.

I'd rework that bio accordingly. :)


EDIT: I see you've already applied at TNO.

Sorry. I meant if Nightmare appeared in a movie he would have these skills hehehe... I've tried to apply but no one said I was accepted so I don't know if I'm allowed to train. I'll change the BIO though. I gve the info but I don't know if tno have accepted me or not.

It's best to be patient I suppose, the guys in TNO all have various real life concerns to attend to, so don't be disheartended by thier lack of speed when seeing to your application.

I doubt you'll have long to wait.

Hey... are you Nanannak? This screams him, and your av kind of looks like his war turtle thing.

No Nananak only gave me an age idea thats it but I trie to draw made up characters it goes down the drain. Nananak looked realer than Darth Nightmare will ever look except in my mind... Ya see he has skill I don't, but Nightmare is a robot sorta like Grievous and Vader yes Darth Thomas dies and gets the mechanical suit. But he's more like Grievous cause it's a robot with his brain and heart no literally the heart and brain or in the robot all feelings except hate, anger ext. Were removed (Dalek like I know) to make him living non breathing carnige!!! But it went horribly wrong with my terrible picture of him. And my changing ideas.

Wow, this is... you should probably take a look at the TRF Timeline because this makes no sense compared to it.

What does that mean??? And I have looked at it.

I made up episodes 7-10 for fun (not official) they're inbetween where Solo and Leia divorce and episode 6. It sounds silly but my story probaly throws off the whole starwars timeline cause Luke dies in episode 9. Leia and Han survive though but in general it's about different Jedi. Titles: V|| (7) the beggining of a new war. V||| (8) The Sith Rise Again. |X (9) The War of Jedi and Sith 92nd title: The Galactic War) . X (10) The Republic's Final Fight. It goes like this: Luke is 50 when episode 7 takes place, he's 54 when episode 8 takes place he's 60 in episode 9 (where he get's killed) and whould of been 65 in episode 10. In episode 7 main characters are: Jedi Master Thomas, Jedi Knight Scott, Padawan Learner Joshua, Jedi Master Tew and Padawan Learner John. The bad guys are: Darth Jordan Master, Darth Iki Master and Darth Cullun apprentice. In 8: Jedi Master Scott, Padawan Josh, Knight John and Master Tew. Bad Guys are: Darth Thomas Apprentice , Darth Iki Master , Darth Webster Apprentice and Darth Jordan master. In 9: Jedi Master Joshua, Jedi Master Stonehouse, Padawan Christian, Master Tew, Padawan Luther and Luke Skywalker. Bad guys: Darth Thomas Knight, Darth Ricchus (Death Max) apprentice, Orogan (Uses lightsaber but not sith he works for them.), Armarda Knight and Rikochet Knight Darth Jordan Master . And in 10: Jedi Masters: Tew, Joshua and Stonehouse, Knights: Christian, Luther, and otheers and too many Padawans to count!!! Bad guys: Darth Jordan (dies finally yay), Darth Ricchus Knight and Darth Thomas (last appearance) Master. After that at the end of 10 Thomas's dieing FORM WAS REBUILT AS DARTH NIGHTMARE!!!! duh duh duh dudududududu dumdumdumdumdum dumdumdumdumdum duh duh duh duh duh duh......

Duh-duh...Dumb. St-st-st-stuttering problem?

This hurts.

Kas... please make it stop.

My bad, I stepped out of line. I apologise Nightmare.

no problem I was refering to the Dark Side theme song. And I can't draw Nightmare!!!!! I was thinking combining the Nocturnal Hammerhead like structure + General Grievous's metallic cyborg idea. You have to see Pitch Black (an 18) to see the Hammerhead (since they destroyed NXRCI or whatever it was called) so I'm doomed!!! Okay a little dramatic as the tension builds in the forum. Oh well.

P.S: I forgot to right in my last post, who is KAS?

One of the admins here.

And nightmare . . . calm down.

as i stated before... kas and omnae dont pay me enough drugs for this shit.

You can try editing your last post. That nifty little link under your online/offline status allows you to do that.

hahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahaha

You get payed drugs? Who runs this site paying people drugs. If he was paying ridiculous amounts of money fine he's a nutter but drugs, whats a guy gonna do with drugs? (Except swallowing them)

*pressed ban button repeatedly*




Damn.

Unacceptable.

Rewrite this.

For sure. This whole bio needs reworking. And it stinks of Nananak to me...