Accidental Thread. I was creating another character and I accidentally stayed logged in. My bad.
Author: Toru'yan. Posted At: 08/08/2005 at 10:14 PM
(Sorry about the mess-up with the first post. This is my new guy.)
Name: Toru'yan
Species: Twi'lek
Homeworld: Ryloth
Sex: Male
Height: 2 meters
Weight: 215 lbs.
Hair Color: None (he's a Twi'lek)
Eye Color: Yellow
Skin Color: Green
Age: 19
Description: Toru'yan generally covers his muscular body with black robes from his shoulders to his feet. His lekku generally hang freely down his back, as he is a warrior, not a diplomat. A training lightsaber hangs at his side.
History: Toru'yan grew up as a warrior on Ryloth. Something was special about him, though no one could figure out what it was. When he was twelve, a Jedi Master's shuttle had to make an emergency landing on Ryloth. The government wanted to rush him out, but Toru'yan was drawn to him. The Jedi recognized the Force in the young Twi'lek, and when the shuttle left the planet, Toru'yan was on it. He was transported to the Jedi Academy, where he trained until his nineteenth birthday, on which he was told that he was ready to be apprenticed to a Master. Now all he needs to find is the Master.
Author: Seth Vinda. Posted At: 08/08/2005 at 10:20 PM
Not a bad start, welcome to TRF.
Author: General Grevious. Posted At: 08/09/2005 at 07:02 PM
Needs more, but so far, so good.
Author: Vance Jas. Posted At: 08/10/2005 at 06:01 AM
Might be worth going back and filling out those ten years or so. Tell us more about his training, friends he might have made, missions he was tested on, etc. As some suggestions.