Biographies Archive

Okay. Seems you've based your history off a lot of canon Star Wars events, for the most part; while this is acceptable, and by no means wrong on most boards, here at TRF we have a certain timeline of what has happened and who may of been involved.

I'd suggest you redo the entire history. Remove the canon characters (Thrawn, Daala, etc) from the entire thing, and replace them with vague NPCs; this will allow you to keep things semi-original, while not conflicting with TRF's history/timeline.

I would also suggest expanding on some of the points you've mentioned, and place this entire application through a spell check; and while you're at it, make it double entered for new paragraphs.

Important: If you're really intent on joining TNO (The New Order), then I'd suggest PMing one of the leaders accordingly and asking for a quick dotpoint memo on what's happened, who did it, and anything else you need to know; this will then allow you to better compile your bio, and work towards getting you accepted into their ranks.

Show some creativity, show some originality, and try to keep a more stable timeline for events; this could mean including more age mentions at certain times, or whatnot.

Look forward to your replies or additions to the application.

Thanks.

the thrawn triligy is on both the NO and the RF timeline, can i still use that part?

Yes but it takes place a good deal back in the timeline. We are what - 20 yeasr post Endor? So that would make the Thrawn campaigns fifteen years prior.

this is rich.

Acutually now I've decided to completely wipe this whole imperial thing and just start my bio over fresh, any way i can edit posts

oh, there's the big red "edit" button!

There, done