Author: Master JMaxRig. Posted At: 06/04/2006 at 03:55 PM
(OOC:Not done yet!)
Max Reem was born on Korriban to Stephanie and Jonathan Reem. His mother was his father's padawan and the mother planned to train her son to be a jedi. His mother was killed on Korriban by a sith. Jonathan quit being a jedi and decided to travel. Max's only friend in his childhood was Dorn Velvok.
Jon trained his son to understand Germanican, because Max was half and his brother was the former ruler of the Germanicans. Jon taught his son this so both of them would always be safe. Max's father was killed by what Max believed was a sith. Max grew up swearing revenge.
Max resorted to stealing credits from people to pay for food, clothing, and transportation. When Max was eighteen he helped people that fought in the war. He was a good pilot, medic, and shooter. Max met Dorn Velvok in the war, his childhood friend. Max and Dorn thought of starting a lightside group called the Grays. Neither of them didn't think it was possible, but both were wrong.
Max left the war and his good friend Dorn and decided best he should go to the jedi. Max found out he was force sensitive two months before his twentieth birthday and was taken in by the Azguardian jedi, Dolash, to be trained.
While Max was being trained he was staying up nights and thinking of his parents. He also was planning...planning for the Grays. Max's friend Dorn, takes care of the Grays for Max until he return.
Author: Beff Pike. Posted At: 06/04/2006 at 07:54 PM
Welcome to The Rebel Faction.
Just a few pointers and comments about your biography...
Two: I'm not sure if you intend to write your character in the first person or not, however; you may want to reconsider using the first person for your biography as, in many cases, that particular writing form can be a much more difficult medium to employ.
Three: You are welcome to create your own faction. That said, I would highly suggest you get a little more experience under you belt before you do so. In fact, you may want to examine a couple of the current factions with ties to the Force and Force users. I suggest the Sith Order as, by and large, your current information seems indicative of a no-nonsense style of play.
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Four: Before you revise or edit this post, I'd suggest taking a gander at the various Biography submissions already within the forum. It may give you some inspiration.