Description: He is a rather tall and muscular jedi. He has piercing blue eyes and dirty blonde hair that is kept rather short. His chest and back has many scars that he keeps hidden with his robes. He has rather sharp facial features and no damage upon his face except for a tiny scar on his right cheek.
History: Since leaving the Jedi order long ago he has excommunicated himself after his young padawan was dismissed from the order for allowing his emotions to always get the better of him. Tom left shortly after and chose to live an outkast live after he watched many of his friends die at the hands of the dark jedi, including his ex-padawan, whom roam the galaxy free. He fought against the dark jedi for a time, but a few sith lords trapped him and almost killed him. After leaving him for dead he came back to himself and healed over time and now keeps to himself in the outter rim on Melida/Daan. The scars are something that he knows could heal with the right techniques, but keeps them as a reminder of what happened. He trains himself daily, still keeping to the jedi techniques, but only wishes for peace.
Author: Beff Pike. Posted At: 07/31/2006 at 08:35 PM
Have you read our Force User Rules and FAQ?
Is this a pre-existing character at TRF I am unaware of?
Author: Tom. Posted At: 07/31/2006 at 09:09 PM
No It's not a pre-existing character and it appears I have misunderstood, but what would you suggest to me now? scrap this character?
Author: Max Reem. Posted At: 07/31/2006 at 09:10 PM
Like Beff said. Have you had training to become at a accessible rank to have a padawan? Also, put it through a spell checker, it helps a lot! Have a good time on TRF and welcome.
~Max
Author: Max Reem. Posted At: 07/31/2006 at 09:12 PM
No, don't do that, edit it. Take out the padawan stuff. If you want, you can train yourself so keep that on there, if you want.
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Author: Beff Pike. Posted At: 07/31/2006 at 09:21 PM
I suggest reading and re-reading those few lines. We regulate our force users, after a fashion, and as such new characters in the Galaxy do not usually start out as full Jedi. To carry the title you must meet the requirments.
It's a building process, a budding building process.
Good luck, and like Max says, if you have any questions or concerns, feel free to approach me directly. Adieu.