Author: Solarus. Posted At: 08/07/2006 at 01:36 AM
[FONT=Fixedsys][SIZE=1][FONT=Arial][SIZE=5][COLOR=DarkRed]The Biography and Information of Solarus[/COLOR][/SIZE][/FONT]
[FONT=Book Antiqua][SIZE=2][SIZE=3][B]Character Name[/B]: Solarus Trayexar
[B]Age[/B]: 19
[B]Gender[/B]: Male
[B]Species[/B]: Human
[B]Home World[/B]: Naboo
[B]Force Sensitive[/B]: [Refer to Biography]
[B]Clothing[/B]: Old, Worn out Black Robes
[B]Height[/B]: 5'11
[B]Weapons[/B]: None
[B]Appearance[/B]: He has long, brown hair, due to him being alone for quite some time. He is quite muscular because of the need to have great strength to survive on his own. His hair eyes are feirce, and when targeting you, depending on the mood, can be quite unwelcoming.
[B]Personality[/B]: Young but quite responsible, for the fact, he was left on his own at a very young age. Solarus, has a hate towards the Jedi, and will do anything he can to show it. Even through this anger, Solarus has learned to be calm and collective, for it was the only way he would survive on his own. He is fair to most others, and respects the people with more control, or power then he has. He is not very difficult to get along with, but can experience fuery and rage, from the events of his past.
[B]History of Solarus:[/B]
Solarus, from the start of his early childhood, knew nothing of being dependent. With his father dead, and his mother quite ill, Solarus had to provide the food and money for the families need. At the age of 4, Solarus began begging on streets, and picking up any job that could help to feed his mother and himself. At the age of 5, his already sick mother, suffered from a horrible stroke and Solarus was put into a orphange. During this time, he began discovering and doing things most other boys at the orphange could not do. Almost two month's after his mom's death, through tears and pain, Solarus shattered the small picture frame of his mother. He had no idea how he had done such a thing, and this made him even more depressed. At the age of 7, something even stranger happened... when a bully at the orphanage began beating one of his closest friends, Solarus began to experience an emotion he never had before - anger. As the friend was being punched left and right, bleeding immensly, Solarus' anger kept building up, until the point it could not be held in any longer. Holding is hands in the air, to rush towards the bully, Solarus felt a feeling he never had before. The bully suddenly flew off of his friend and rammed into a wall. With a startled look on the bullies face, Solarus dropped to his knees, staring at the palms of is hands. [I]"How did I do this.."[/I] he muttered under his breath.
A few month's later, after the director of the orphanage heard about the incident, Solarus was sent into a office where he met with a Jedi.
[I]"Solarus, my name is Vekarr, I am a Jedi Knight, I am here to try and help you figure out why you are experiencing all of these changes."[/I]
Solarus, reluctant to speak, glared up at the Master, hating his every words.
Suddenly, unexpectedly, Solarus began to speak, [I]"I.. no, just shut up, I dont like what is happening.."[/I]
The Jedi Knight glanced down at the confused little boy and spoke softly [I]"It is okay, we all experience these feelings at one point, but can you tell me what exactly happened?"[/I]
Through all the pain, Solarus glanced up one more and looked into the Jedi's eyes. [I]"All the boys, they hate me now because of it, they dont pick me for the games, they tell me I am stupid and just ignore me, as if I wasnt even there, I DONT WANT TO BE STUPID!"[/I] Solars hollered the last line, his face filling with anger. [I]"I DONT WANT TO BE IGNORED, I WANT THEM TO NOTICE ME!"[/I] He screamed with more intensity and began shaking suddenly. Sobbing some more, Solarus turned around, and tried to ignore the Jedi Master.
[I]"Please, Solarus, you must calm down, tell me when did you begin experiencing these odd things."[/I]
Solarus, now calming down, began to speak softly, [I]"I dont know really, when I
get angry or think of my mother, things around me just shatter, I dont like it, all the other boys make fun of me, and then a few weeks ago, when my friend - the only one I have ever had, began getting picked on, I got so angry and I raised my hands in the air, so I could run and push the bully down, but then right before my eyes, the bully just flew back to the wall."[/I]
The Jedi, looking down at the torn little boy, began to speak, [I]"I understand it must be challenging, what you are feeling, it is known as the force. Solarus, you are what we call a Force Sensitive. You are only beggining to feel what the force is like, let me take you away from here and help you understand and control these... feelings you are having."[/I]
Solarus, having calmed down, looked up to the Jedi, [I]"Thank you, but no thank you, I dont want to have this anymore, I want to be seen by all my friends, so that I can be cool just like all of them."[/I] With that, the stubborn boy walked out of the room, picked up his bag he had been preparing, and ran out of the orphanage, to find himself on his own in the cool and bitter world.
12 full years had passed since that very day and now, the 19 year old Solarus, was wandering on his own. For the past 12 years, Solarus had been running from the orphanage.. never stopping, until he felt he was safe, that day had never come. Always on the move, sneaking on from shuttle to shuttle and sleeping wherever he could find a warm safehaven, Solarus began considering getting his life into place. He would think of his mother quite often and through this experienced even stronger versions of the feelings he had felt when he was younger.
Then one day, on a stormy afternoon, when Solarus happened to be stealing some money from a large man for food something compeletly unexpected hapened. The man turned around and pulled out a knife on him. Almost immediatly becoming scared, Solarus took steps back, trying to dodge the knife's sharp, silver edge. [I]"Please, I am sorry.. I -"[/I] the man suddenly slashed at one of Solarus' hands, making a clean swipe through the bone.
As Solarus felt the pain preside in his arm, he glanced down at the blood surging from his hand onto the ground below him. Screaming with pain, Solarus glanced at the man's hand with the knife, and through the force, made the knife shatter into peices. Pulling himself up, Solarus, rushed over to the man, beating him until suddenly.. the huge male lie flat on the ground, lifeless.
Pulling back, Solarus looked at his hand, and ran away into the now darkened afternoon, until he could not run anymore...
A Few month's later, after his former hand had been replaced by a robotic version in a hospital, Solarus figured out exactly what he wanted - to be a great and powerful Force Sensitive. No longer trying to hide his power, Solarus' to kill the rich and innocent victims for their money. The more and more he killed, the more anger and hate was instilled in him.
One clear night, while sitting down and resting, the 19 year old killer heard some discussion of a group of Force User's called Sith.
"Did you hear a few decades back, there was this great and powerful Sith Lord, I dont really know his name, they say he didnt even have one, well anyways fellas' this Sith killed tons of Jedi and was supposed to be one of the the most powerful and infamous person alive! If I could be like him, I would try and scare all the girls in the world to coming to my bed. HA!" The drunk man continued speaking with his buddies, and Solarus knew what he had to do.
For a few more months, he went onto different shuttles, finding out all of the information he could, until one day he was at the greatest place in the galaxy..
The Sith Order.
[OOC Note: Sorry if it is not very good, I have only Rp'ed once on a Mafia Forum, and it did not last to long, I am anxious to get better at writing, and have some fun Rp'ing. Please, please, give me some pointers on things, as I am extremely willing to learn and grow.][/SIZE][/SIZE][/SIZE][/FONT][/FONT]
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Author: Darami Alexin. Posted At: 08/07/2006 at 09:20 AM
Do not feel as though your writing must be perfect to succeed here. My writing is certainly not of a high standard and I doubt that many of the members at TRF have met the standards of their own expectations.
In relation to your biography, I would like say that The Sith Order is, shall we say, expectant of activity and quality writing. The Sith Order does not usually accept new members though there may be exceptions, which I have seen so do not rule out your chance.
If you make a thread in The Sith Order sub-forum making an application, either in the form of an RP or in the form of an application, you will be reviewed and given an answer within 5 days.
I would also recommend that you make a thread in the Rebel Cafe (Sub-Forum), where you will be given a warm welcome and you can also start to make your influence within the confines of the forum.
If you wish for any more information, you can contact me via: -
MSN: [email]UrbanGenius@hotmail.co.uk[/email]
PM: Darami Alexin
Welcome to TRF.
Author: Solarus. Posted At: 08/07/2006 at 02:46 PM