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[font=Arial]InuYasha Sanyo Real name: Ookami Jasaica Born: AY 3801 (AY = Atlantean Calender Year) Biological Age: 27 Actual Age: 270 Height: 6' 2" Weight: 230 lbs Hair color: white w/ silver streaks Hair length: 60" Eye color: Amber w/ occasional silver streaks Rank: Vice Admiral Title: Wolf's Order Valkyriean Bladesman Vice Commander of the Atlantean Fleet or Vice Fleet Commander of the Atlantean Royal Navy Specialty: Sharpshooter Skills Tactician Sniping Swordplay Weapons: 2x Westar-34 blaster pistols (Kryat Dragon pearl-handled) 1x A280-S blaster rifle 2x DH-17 heavy blaster pistols 1x DL-44 blaster pistol 1x Atlantean Katana 2x Lightsabers (Force-sensitive, non-Jedi) Family: Yuli Ookami (wife/mate) Ookami Kinosuke II (oldest son/pup) Jenaia Ookami (oldest twin - daughter) Seluca Ookami (youngest twin - daughter) Distinguishing characteristics: wolf ears - white fangs claws (hands and feet) gills InuYasha Sanyo's origins are currently unknown. All that is known is that his real name is Ookami Jasaica. He claims to have been born in the Unknown Regions to an secretive culture predating any current civilization by millions of years. Little evidence has been found to support his claim and he remains tight-lipped about his homeworld. Everything about Ookami Jasaica's appearance is deceiving, from his relatively small stature, to his seemingly young age. Standing 6' 2" tall, and weighing in around 230 lbs, he is small in frame (due to a high matebolism) and appears rather weak; many an opponent has discovered, to their horror, that he is anything but small and weak. Possessing a skeleton strengthened with crystalline alloy grafts (which he claims is genetic), as well as enhanced musculature, eyesight, hearing, smell, and nervous system, Ookami Jasaica represents a very formidable opponent. His wolf-like eyes allow him to see in perfect darkness with ease (as if stanging in a dimly lit room), while his wolf ears allow him to pick a single heartbeat out of a crowd. His sense of smell is especially keen, and he can easily track a target by scent alone. In battle, he moves with incredible speed, often seen as a blur by others. Capable of sprints in excess of 65 kph, Ookami can easily close the distance between himself and a target, while his unbelievable reaction time (that one scientist measured in 10,000ths of a second, or 0.000x seconds) enables him to dodge most threats with ease. One soldier at the battle of Endor watched him dodge rounds from not one, but three repeating blasters, all of which were targeting him. He is an expert marksman, capable of headshots from several thousand meters without the aid of scope. He is just as comfortable in close-quarters as he is at long range, and will often draw his katana and charge into the fray. In hand-to-hand combat, he sheaths his katana and fights tooth and nail, literally, as the claws on his hands and feet are incredibly sharp. One of his favority tactics, especially when enraged, is to rush an opponent, grab their head, hold it back, and use his fangs to rip out their throat. He appears to have the limited ability to manipulate items much like a Jedi, although his blood possesses no midi-chlorians. His explanation for this is that he is merely manipulating his aura, a claim supported by the fact that witnesses have seen his sword eminate a powerful wave of energy when Ookami speaks an incantation in an unknown language. [/font] [font=Arial][size=2] Combat Duty: Ookami Jasaica, although appearing to be 27, is actually 270 years old, and has witnsessed several historical events. He is a veteran of the Clone Wars, the Galactic Civil War, the Ssi-Ruu conflict, and the Yuuzhong Vong War. During the Clone War, he led an elite unit of ARC troopers, the 122nd Special Forces Legion at the Battles of Geonosis, Felucia, [/size][/font][font=Arial][size=2]Kashyyyk, and Mygeeto, as well as several other campaigns. Not long after Geonosis, however, Ookami noticed that, while more independant than their infantry counterparts, the ARC troopers under his command still didn't have enough individuality. Thus, he ordered the Kaminoans to alter them to make them completely independent. They were hesitant first, but Ookami said they should copy his troopers and create their own army, saying "I fear that when this is over, the storms of war will again come to Kamino once more, and this time, the Jedi won't be there to help." He also ordered them to make them master pilots and marksman. After this was done, he gave his clones a choice: they could either continue to fight in the war, or they could leave know, and he would list them as Killed in Action. Of the 220 troops under his command, not one ever stepped forward. From then on, Ookami would ask that question before every mission, and the reply was always the same: "We'd rather have the enemy kill us in action, sir." Even when the clones changed to a different armor type, the troopers of the 122nd continued to wear their blue shoulder pauldrons and kamas. Despite their independence, the troops of the 122nd were incredibly loyal to their general, who had lead them in hundreds of battles without any casualties; although it was common for some to be taken off the battlefield in a near-death state. This could be attributed to further Kaminoan manipulation, using Ookami's own rapid-healing genes to increase the survivabilty of the 122nd. They owed much to Ookami, since much of their success hinged on his use of each one's personal strengths and weaknesses, using one trooper's strengths to offset another's weaknesses. When Order 66 came, Ookami already knew that it was the end of the War. He sheathed his sword and, without looking back, said "We've been through a lot these past few years. It was an honor serving with you . . . all of you. . . . Do what you must." Commander Hada began to squeeze the trigger, hesitated, then fired. The entire legion poured savage fire into the area to Ookami's left, where several droids had been hiding. Ookami stood there, never flinching or startling. When Commander Hada stood next to him, he said only one thing: "You were ordered to kill me. Why didn't you?" Hada replied "Because you're not a Jedi . . . and you're definately not a traitor." While the latter was true, the former was not, as Ookami was once named as an honorable Jedi for his ability to manipulate objects. Ookami did not refer to himself as a Jedi, but had mentioned this fact to his team during chow. Unlike most non-clone generals, Ookami chose to eat with his men, saying "How can I lead them into battle if I can't even share a meal with them." Ookami would also wear the armor of his troops into battle, with his father's blaster-proof battle kimono underneath. Instead of a helmet, however, he would wear a black beret with a gold insignia portraying an eagle, head bowed, clutching a pistol in one claw, and perching on the shaft of a trident with the other, while the pistol lay across an anchor (the US Navy SEALS insignia). After secretly disobeying Order 66, Ookami listed the 122nd as Killed in Action, and cited a previous battle, and even included overwritten images of another Special Forces Legion at that battle. The "Figthing 122nd" Special Forces Legion was never seen again, although there is evidence to suggest that they may be part of InuYasha Sanyo's Special Marine Combat Forces. [/size][/font]

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omfg.

Overblown, much?

You might as well throw in "Uber Jedi trained in the ways of the Sith and master of his own Super DUPER Class Star Destroyer and an army of undead penguins."

The reaction time given is his twitch response time. He only moves this quickly in intense combat, and even then, he becomes slower as his stamina decreases. He normally runs (in battle) at speeds of about 10 kph, and runs at about 6 kph in everyday life. Even in normal paced hand-to-hand combat, he perceives everything as moving too slowly. This is commonly referred to as "bullet-time". And he ain't an uber-Jedi, either, nor does he know the ways of the Sith. In fact, he has no knowledge of the Force, but can use his aura to manipulate objects around him. He does not, however, denounce the existence of the Force, only that it is another way of explaining the unexplainable. While he claims to be a mercenary, he is an incredibly well trained soldier.

How about this; no!

You can be a human or other canon alien. You can have one blaster, one set of clothes and one shitty ass fucking starship. You can be no older then three standard decades and you cannot claim any special education or abilities.

Once you demonstrate an ability to, you know, not be a fucking God-Moder, I'll think about changing my mind. We're not having another Atlantean Empire escapade over your single character, period. Take it or leave it.

lmao...

Classic!...

I'm sorry InuYasha, but while you have obviously taken a while to think about your character, one could say you've thought about him perhaps too much.

What I mean by this is, you've given your character so much, in the way of attributes , skills, looks, etc...(and even ranks!) that you've almost left your character with nowhere else left to go.

It leads me to believe that perhaps you don't seem to quite understand what roleplaying is really about.

Roleplaying is not just about 'playing a character' and its not about trying to make your character perfect so that he or she can defeat anyone or anything. In all honesty wheres the fun in that?

Its about developing a character, writing storylines that enhance and help to 'create' and 'refine' your character. Intereacting with other people's characters and writing stories together.

No-one is perfect and your character should reflect that! Its only natural for everybody to have flaws, to fail, to make mistakes, to get beaten, to lose...

It happens to everyone at some point, its how we learn as human beings...

Creating a character which makes mistakes, has flaws , makes for interesting reading, and also attractive roleplaying for other people.

Also you are kind of depriving yourself of one of the joys of writing!

Seeing a character develop over time is one of the most gratifying things as a roleplayer, and by creating Uber-characters you're robbing yourself of this aspect.

For example: If you create your character to be a Jedi Knight already, you lose the chance to go up through the ranks, to earn the titles, to develop your character's training and skills...to make allies and enemies along the way...

You may also find new avenues of possibilities you may have never of thought of.

Depicting your character(s) as having weaknesses or flaws makes them more, rounded, more real...

Its not a competition to see who can create the most unbeatable character.

You'll find doing so can be a very lonely experience.


Just some advice.









...Gonna get me some of those gills though...

Ah, poor Seth. He doesn't know what he's getting into...

He missed the whole thing.

Seth, you know I have a penchant for the diplomatic. Believe me when I say (or type and state) that my above comment was, if anything, too polite. You will doubtless understand soon what I mean by this. Mwah! and all. Very nicely worded, but I fear, your protestations will fall on deaf ears.

It's like leading a mule; you don't do it with kind words and lumps of sugar, you do it with a two inch thick twitch or treebranck and dole out those lumps accordinly.

We have a mule.

Well, one can but try.

;)

We have. We did.

I'm so glad I didn't try to start the Isharian Empire and conquer everyone here. the replies to my attempts would be brutal!!!!!

By the way, the Isharian Navy is engaged in a battle over Coruscant! Join the Isharian Navy and rule the galaxy!!

Ok, enough of this, I have to edit Ishara's bio to include her Pre-School through High School years along with her point average. Good night everyone!

roflmao!

Frickin' sweet.

I thought you might like that!!!!

;)

Inuyasha, as an avid Anime Fanatic (just look in my room, you won't find one space NOT covered in anime) I must ask that you stop making a fricking fool out of yourself and tarnishing that characters good name:

For starters, anime in general is NOT well liked on this board; I learned that almost the first week I registered here (although my sister kind of told me as well :p)

Further more, in the Roleplaying community we have a name for biography's like your's - Mary Sue, or characters who are god-like. You're character IS god like in terms of how he presents himself and how old he is, but also because of where he is born.

You need to STOP doing this and LEARN to follow THIS BOARDS rules and regulations and how we do things here - keep this up and you may piss the admins off to a point where they WILL ban you.

Now tone it down, look at you're biography again, and create someone who isn't so god-like. Do what Beff said and read his post for fricking sake.

Shit.. it's like where beating a dead horse here....:mad

Ditch the damned Anime. Star Wars is not anime. Be creative and make your own character. You can start with a concept similar to what's come before, but make some points to bring it into it's own. And start small. It's damn fun to start small. That way, when you stand at the top you're like 'Damn, I'm the awesome'.

Oh, and in closing...

Wisen up. Or I can and will flame you like a mage on a bender.

I'm just mad he lives in the same state as me. Like an hour away.


I'm going to go lock my doors now.

Im aware that many have come before me and I'm no biology major but:

Wouldn't it be horrendously difficult to breathe out of water with gills? Like as a rule I don't see many fish breathing real well in the air.

He's a lung fish.

Ha!

I'm a newb here myself InuYasha and what Kalshion said is 110% true. Look at it this way. When I joined, I didn't make Xara Empress of a mysterious planet and declare her a Sith Mistress with supreme power of the darkside, as much as I would have liked to being honest with you. I didn't attempt to overpower Vance and Recon and the rest of the Sith who have been here for a very long time and took a great deal of that time developing their characters. I didn't create a navy that can overpower anyone elses who again took a long time to create. I know I'll get to where I want Xara to be eventually and it makes it more interesting along the way.

I don't think you intended to upset everyone like you did. I think everyone here who has given you a hard time would be would be impressed if you took a step back, and InuYasha started fresh from the bottom. I know you can do it so give it a try.

;)

:O

Xara, I... love you!

Ugh. Stop trying to help this guy already.

Shit.

Ive never seen a guy so publicly screamed at on TRF *laughs*.

i like a couple of mangas, but im not hellbent on them, you know?

Considering how long you've been here....

Beff, bring out Penn!

You suck too, stop pretending you don't.

LMAO!!!!!

Though I have to admit at being a newb myself. ;)